Jan 8, 2022
Dan ... sad to say: "I agree with so much of the latest critique of your own writing. It lacks discipline and structure. You should carefully edit your articles before you press the publish button."
Read the comments of others and take them to heart; take action ... and you'll reap the rewards. There's no guarantee that you'll earn big, but at least people will continue to read you. And that's good!
Every good wish Dan,
Fred